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Lonely Writ3003 - Exploring Emotion (ADV Poetry) 

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Who am I, if I’m not writing about a heart break? Truthfully, I’ve used many of my writing classes to explore emotion my other classes didn’t provide time to do. Vulnerability (again) makes for great writing; the goal of this assignment was to look at how to include repetition and its impact on the story.  

Lonely

Original

Text:

Cheating again

For my attention

Looking for a reaction

Wants me to yell

And start lashing

Out on her

For acting

Like she wants me out the door

So she can pull me back in

And say she loves me

And start laughing

Like it was all a joke before

Accapella

Version:

LonelyBaby DaeDae
00:00 / 02:49

Podcast

Analysis:

Lonely AnalysisBaby DaeDae
00:00 / 07:36
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